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Victoria Vale hates Valentine’s Day.
After a couple of boyfriends who mocked the holiday, she
soured on the whole idea. Still, when her mother asks her to
appear in a Valentine’s Day fashion show, she agrees. Vicky
doesn’t count on meeting her new stepbrother, Kirk Magnuson,
or on being attracted to him. Can a girl who hates
Valentine’s Day manage to turn the day into something good at
last?
Valentine Wishes had
several things going for it right from the beginning. Vicky
is a refreshingly average woman: full-figured, easily
flustered at times, and sometimes unsure. I liked the idea of
her hating Valentine’s Day, as well as her participation in a
wedding-themed fashion show. Mlyn Hurn shows a real knack for
secondary characters as well, and Valentina Vale (Vicky’s mom)
and Mark Magnuson (Kirk’s dad) provided several fun scenes.
All of those things seemed like the set-up for a great holiday
story. As I read, however, I began to get frustrated with the
hero and heroine. Uneven characterization made Kirk initially
come off as kind of a jerk, and throughout the book his
character wavered between being a slightly alpha but very
tender lover and being wishy-washy. There were several places
in the story where characters thought about or spoke about
seemingly major events that had happened off-screen, which
made following their changes of heart or mind difficult. Some
of the dialogue was very unrealistic, especially during the
erotic scenes. If you really love holiday stories, or stories
in which a once-bitten-twice-shy heroine learns to love again,
you might like Valentine Wishes. If not, pass
this one by. |